Chapter 4

Echoes of a Broken Prayer

Investigating the Jade Eater's origins, Xian learns it's not mere malice but a being of immense age and pain, born from a forgotten betrayal that echoes through ages.

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The air in Elder Bai’s study was thick with the scent of aged paper, dried ink, and something else… something akin to crushed moonlight. Li Xian inhaled deeply, the familiar aroma a balm to his frayed nerves. He had spent the better part of the morning poring over scrolls that detailed the celestial lineage of dragons, their elemental affinities, and the intricate rituals that governed their existence. None of it, however, explained the singular, impossibly small wound that had ended the life of Lord Xuanyu, the Celestial Dragon of the Eastern Peaks.

Elder Bai sat across from him, his wizened face illuminated by the soft glow of a single, intricately carved lantern. His fingers, like gnarled roots, traced the faded characters on a brittle scroll. “The lore speaks of vast cosmic battles, of dragons wielding the fury of storms and the stillness of mountains,” he murmured, his voice a gravelly whisper. “But it rarely speaks of their vulnerabilities. And certainly not of a wound so… delicate.”

Xian nodded, his gaze fixed on a sketch of Lord Xuanyu that depicted the dragon in its full, magnificent glory – scales like polished emeralds, eyes like twin stars, wings that spanned a horizon. Beside it, he had drawn the minuscule puncture, a stark, unsettling contrast. “It’s the same mark, Elder Bai. The same signature that killed my father.” He paused, the words catching in his throat. Thirty years. Thirty years since his father, Investigator Li An, had succumbed to an unknown ailment, leaving behind only a cryptic journal and a gaping hole in Xian’s young life. And now, this.

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