Chapter 16
A Friend's Counsel
Conrad offers Eli advice, urging him to focus on his own healing. He emphasizes that Claire's success doesn't diminish Eli's worth.
The late afternoon sun, usually a warm embrace, felt like a cold interrogation on Eli’s skin. He leaned against the weathered brick of his childhood home, the familiar scent of honeysuckle and decaying leaves doing little to soothe the raw ache in his chest. Conrad, ever the steady presence amidst Eli’s internal tempest, sat beside him on the porch steps, a half-eaten apple in his hand, its crisp snap echoing the fractured pieces of Eli’s world.
“She’s moving on, Eli,” Conrad said, his voice gentle, devoid of judgment. “And that’s… that’s a good thing.”
Eli scoffed, a harsh, ragged sound. “A good thing? For her, maybe. For me, it feels like being erased. Like everything we had, everything *I* thought we had, was just a placeholder until she found something better.” The words tasted like ash. He’d pictured this homecoming for months: the shared laughter, the rekindled intimacy, the easy comfort of knowing Claire was still his. Instead, he’d walked into a ghost town, populated by a woman who looked like his Claire but held herself with an unfamiliar distance, a woman who had already charted her course, leaving him stranded at the port.
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