Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Anna Mak arrives at the International University of Elements, passes the entrance exam as a water user, and immediately clashes with second-year fire user Kim Ji-hoon when she fails to bow in apology after accidentally splashing him. She is unaware of the school's strict hierarchy, but Ji-hoon takes it as a personal insult and vows to make her leave.
The International University of Elements perched on a scattering of islands just off the coast of Busan, its spires a testament to elemental magic itself. Towers of grey granite, shimmering glass, and ice crystallized by arcane will rose beside structures of compressed air solidified into form, and obsidian fused by impossible heat. It was the kind of place that dwarfed you, shrinking your concerns to insignificance the moment your ferry docked, and Anna Kowalska felt the weight of that smallness settle upon her like a shroud.
A faint smudge of earth, a souvenir from her journey, marked her right cheek. Her clothes—a practical, sturdy jacket, well-worn jeans, boots that had traversed three countries—felt jarringly out of place amidst the cascade of flowing, formal uniforms worn by the students who streamed past. Each wore the same deep navy blazer, its silver trim catching the light, the school crest a proud emblem over the heart: a circle bisected into four quadrants, each bearing the sigil of fire, water, air, and earth. Anna’s fingers tightened around her acceptance letter, its thin paper a fragile shield against the enormity of it all. Two years of meticulous saving, a loan from her aunt, and a scholarship that barely chipped away at the tuition fees. Back home in Kraków, her mother’s double shifts at the factory, her younger brother’s secondary school expenses, her grandmother’s constant need for medication that outstripped the monthly rent – this was the only viable escape route.
Four years. That was all. Graduate, secure a good position, and send money home. Water magic, advanced hydrodynamics, elemental theory, practical applications. The path seemed deceptively clear.
"Excuse me!"
A voice, calm and clear, cut through the din. A girl with intelligent eyes and neatly trimmed dark hair had materialized at Anna’s elbow. She wore the same navy blazer, but a small silver pin on her lapel—a stylized wave—drew Anna’s attention. Another water user, like herself.
"You're the new foreign student, aren't you?" the girl inquired, her English precise, though tinged with a careful cadence. "I'm Park Seo-yeon. First year, water element. I was asked to show you around."
"Anna," she replied, offering a handshake that might have been a fraction too firm in her eagerness. "Thank you. I confess, I got lost twice trying to find the registration office. The map is—"
"Terrible?" Seo-yeon finished, a small smile touching her lips. "Yes. It's been inaccurate for three years, but no one seems inclined to update it. Come, I'll take you to the dorms first."
They moved through a courtyard where students, in designated circles, practiced their craft. A fire user sculpted a perfect, dancing spiral of flame; an air user hovered a collection of stones in mid-air; an earth user coaxed a vine to snake up a stone wall with impossible speed. Anna absorbed it all, her eyes wide. Back home, elemental magic was a rare, often weak, phenomenon. Here, it flowed as naturally as the air they breathed.
"So," Seo-yeon began as they passed a fountain that sent water arcing in intricate, impossible patterns, devoid of any visible mechanism, "do you have any understanding of the school's customs?"
"Customs?" Anna echoed, a flicker of unease.
"Honorifics. Seniority. Hierarchy." Seo-yeon’s voice lowered slightly, a subtle shift in tone. "It’s of paramount importance here. Second-years are addressed as seonbae, third-years as seonbae-nim. Fourth-years warrant a bow and averted eyes unless directly addressed. Teachers are seon-saeng-nim. And one always, always offers a proper apology if a senior is inconvenienced."
Anna blinked, processing the information. "Apologize how?"
"A bow. From the waist. Hold it for a count of three. And say joesonghamnida."
"That seems… rather formal," Anna ventured.
"It's tradition," Seo-yeon said, and a subtle inflection in her voice hinted at a complex relationship with that very word. "Just follow along, and you should be fine. Most seniors are reasonable. Most."
Anna mentally filed the directive: bowing, honorifics, avoid antagonizing older students. She could manage that. She’d navigated far more challenging social landscapes, including her first job in Kraków at a bakery where the owner’s tirades, delivered in three languages, had been a daily occurrence.
They rounded a corner, and Anna’s boot caught on an uneven cobblestone. She lurched forward, arms windmilling, and her water magic—always a bit too eager, a touch too reactive—surged outward in an involuntary splash. A wave of water, roughly the volume of a small bucket, erupted from her palms, striking the person directly in front of her. Squarely on the back of the head.
The figure froze.
He was tall, with sharp features and impeccably styled dark hair that was now slicked down, water tracing rivulets down the back of his formal uniform. He turned, slowly, and Anna’s gaze fell upon the silver pin on his lapel: a flame. A fire user. A second-year, judging by the single silver stripe on his sleeve.
His eyes, dark and unnervingly cold, narrowed. His lips curved into an expression that was less a smile and more a baring of teeth.
"I am so incredibly sorry!" Anna exclaimed, rushing forward. "I didn't mean to—my foot slipped—the cobblestone was—"
Seo-yeon’s instructions flashed through her mind. Bow. From the waist. Count of three. Joesonghamnida.
But in her flustered panic, the bow eluded her. She simply stood there, hands clasped, repeating her apology, "Sorry, sorry, truly so sorry—"
The fire user's gaze swept over her, from her face to her practical clothes, then to the water still dripping from his hair. He uttered something in Korean, his tone flat and devoid of emotion, a language Anna didn't understand.
Seo-yeon moved swiftly, executing a deep, respectful bow. "Joesonghamnida, seonbae-nim. She is new. She does not yet understand—"
"I can see she is new," the fire user interrupted in English, his accent precise, each word carrying a sharp edge. His gaze remained fixed on Anna. "And I can see she does not understand. That, Mis Mak, is the problem, is it not?"
Anna felt a flush creep up her neck. "I truly am sorry. Please, let me—I can dry your uniform? I can use air magic to—"
"Stick to water," he commanded, his voice chillingly calm. "You are already quite proficient at that."
He turned and walked away without another word, leaving a faint trail of damp footprints on the ancient stone.
Seo-yeon let out a slow breath. "That was Kim Ji-hoon. Second year. Fire user. His family has been affiliated with this school for four generations."
"He seemed… pleasant," Anna offered weakly.
Seo-yeon regarded her with a look that was a mixture of pity and exasperation. "He is the kind of person who weaponizes 'tradition.' You must apologize properly. Find him later, bow, and say the words. It will be fine."
Anna nodded, but the memory of Ji-hoon’s gaze—a look that dismissed her as an unwelcome blemish on his meticulously ordered world—lodged itself in her mind, whispering that ‘fine’ was a distant prospect.
Ji-hoon stood before a large window in the second-year common room, his fingers raking through his still-damp hair. The water hadn't been cold; her magic carried a surprising warmth, almost body temperature. That, however, only amplified his irritation. She hadn't even possessed the basic courtesy to bow. A foreigner, a water user, who apparently couldn't be bothered to grasp the most fundamental rule of respect.
"I heard you received an impromptu baptism from a first-year," a voice drawled from behind him. Park Min-jun, another fire user, grinned as he sank onto a plush couch. "Word travels fast. They’re saying she didn’t even offer a proper apology."
"She mumbled 'sorry' in English," Ji-hoon replied, his back still to his companion. "No bow. No honorific. She simply stood there, like a startled fawn."
Min-jun snorted. "And what do you intend to do about it?"
Ji-hoon remained silent for a beat, his gaze fixed on the sunset painting the islands in hues of orange and rose. Students ambled along the paths below, their laughter and chatter drifting up, punctuated by the practice of their elemental abilities. Normal students. Korean students. Students who understood the intricate workings of this place. And somewhere within that throng was a Polish girl who evidently believed she could simply arrive, learn their magic, and depart as if she belonged.
"I intend to ensure she does not remain long enough to cause further disruption," Ji-hoon stated, his voice hardening. "Some rules are not optional, especially for those who do not truly belong."
Min-jun’s eyebrows rose, but he offered no further comment. Ji-hoon’s reputation was well-established; when he set his mind to a task, failure was a rare outcome.
That evening, Anna sat on the edge of her narrow bed in the first-year dormitory, her gaze fixed on the textured plaster of the ceiling. Seo-yeon had provided a whirlwind crash course in school etiquette: the appropriate address for seniors, the precise timing for bows, the acceptable phrases, and the ones best left unspoken. It felt akin to learning an entirely new language from scratch.
"He will not let this go," Seo-yeon had warned before departing, her expression etched with concern. "Ji-hoon is… deeply traditional. He perceives you as a disruption."
"I simply wish to learn and then return home," Anna had countered, a plea in her voice. "Is that truly too much to ask?"
Seo-yeon had offered no easy answer.
Now, alone in the dim light, Anna replayed the encounter endlessly. The sudden splash, the chill in his eyes, the dismissive way he’d brushed her aside as if she were insignificant. She retrieved her phone, her fingers finding her mother's number. Two rings, then a click.
"Ania? Is everything alright?"
"Everything is fine, Mamo," Anna replied, injecting a forced brightness into her tone. "I’ve arrived. The school is magnificent. I’ve met a very kind girl who is helping me."
"Good, good. Eat well. Don't forget to—"
"I know, I will. I love you."
"I love you too, córeczko."
Anna ended the call, letting the phone drop onto the thin mattress. She thought of her mother’s weary voice, her brother’s school fees, her grandmother’s medication. She thought of the loan, the scholarship, the arduous four years stretching before her. And she thought of Kim Ji-hoon’s cold, assessing eyes.
I will not let him ruin this, she vowed silently. I will learn the rules. I will apologize. And I will graduate.
Yet, as she finally closed her eyes, a persistent unease settled within her, a premonition that the fire user had already charted her course, and a graduation ceremony was not part of his plan.
The following morning, a crisp white note, slipped beneath her dormitory door, drew Anna’s attention. It was penned on formal school stationery, the handwriting sharp and precise.
"Miss Mak. Report to the second-year training hall immediately following your first class. We need to discuss the incident. — K. Ji-hoon."
Seo-yeon, reading it over Anna’s shoulder, visibly paled.
"Anna," she whispered, her voice tight with alarm. "That is not a discussion. That is a summons."