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Chapter 34

Chapter 34 — The Weight of Fathers

Aldren wakes to Meredith-Kay's telepathic voice saying 'I love you,' and the baby declares the day belongs to her and her father — a day of carrying, bathing in both springs, and letting the mothers find each other. Kayline, awake and listening, nurses Meredith-Kay while Aldren prepares. Father and daughter spend the day visiting both springs, where Meredith-Kay teaches Aldren to listen to water the way she listens to thought. At the original spring near the house, Aldren bathes the baby and receives a vision of his own past through her eyes. At the new spring in the dead zone, Meredith-Kay shows him how the two springs are connected through him — he is the bridge between the waters, between the mothers, between what was broken and what healed. Meanwhile at the house, Kayline and Mireth share a slow intimate day of their own — bathing, touching, discovering new dimensions of their bond without the baby or Aldren present. Harrow, Corvus, and Vesper maintain the perimeter. When Aldren returns with Meredith-Kay at dusk, the family reunites, and the baby sends each of them an image: four stick figures on a path, but now the path branches and rejoins, and all four walk it together, sometimes paired, sometimes whole, always connected.

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Aldren woke the way he'd woken every morning since the naming — which was to say, not the way he'd woken for any of the years before it.

Before: gradual surfacing, the body's grudging negotiation with consciousness, the awareness that another day required participation and participation required vertical positioning and vertical positioning required caring about something. Before had been functional. Mechanical. The quiet machinery of a man who had survived long enough to make survival feel like routine, which is the dream of the endangered and the curse of the unendangered alike.

Now: I love you.

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