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Chapter 1

Chapter 1

On a cruise to Da Nang, Vietnam, former Green Beret-turned-private investigator Michael Stone meets a spirited traveler named Rita. They share a brief, warm conversation. The next day, Rita goes missing after disembarking. Michael, moved by a personal connection and his professional instinct, takes on the case to find her.

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The crewman’s jaw tightened. “Standard policy, miss. I can’t explain it any plainer than that.”

Rita Cross planted her hands on her hips, the breeze off the South China Sea whipping her long brunette hair across her face. She tucked it behind her ear without breaking eye contact. “You can’t explain it at all, is what you’re saying. There’s a difference between policy and an explanation.”

Michael Stone watched from the rail, arms crossed. He hadn’t meant to eavesdrop, but her voice carried the kind of clarity that cut through wind and engine noise. She wasn’t loud. She was certain. That certainty had a shape he recognized—the same shape he wore himself, though his came quieter now, worn down by decades.

The crewman shifted his weight, glanced at the chart room door, and muttered something about passenger requests needing to go through guest services. He retreated.

Rita turned and caught Michael’s eye. She shrugged, a small, unapologetic smile touching her lips. “Sorry. I have a problem with doors that don’t open.”

“They opened,” Michael said. “You just had to find the right hinge.”

She laughed, stepping closer. She was taller than he’d first thought, with an easy stride that suggested she knew her way around a city. “Are you always so philosophical about bureaucracy?”

“Only when it’s entertaining.”

She extended her hand. Her grip was firm, brief, her eyes holding his a moment past polite. “I’m Rita.”

“Michael.”

Up close, he caught the details the dusk light had hidden from a distance: the fine lines at the corners of her eyes, the way she scanned the deck behind him as they spoke, cataloging, processing. She wasn’t just a tourist with opinions. She was practiced at noticing things.

“Traveling alone?” he asked.

“Yes. I’ve wanted to see North Vietnam for years. Not the resorts. The real places—the sounds. The clatter of a moped repair, a monk’s chanting, the bowls in a street kitchen. I call them jingles. The noises that make a place honest.”

Michael nodded slowly. “I know what you mean. I was here during the war. Different sounds then.”

She didn’t flinch or offer sympathy. She just watched him, curious, waiting for him to continue or not. He didn’t.

They talked another ten minutes, leaning against the rail as the sky bruised violet and orange. She asked about his work. Private investigator, he said. She didn’t press for details. He asked about her plans, and she painted pictures of temples in Hoi An, the floating markets on the Mekong, the back alleys of Da Nang where she hoped to find a particular shop that sold hand-painted lanterns.

“You sound like you’ve done this before,” he said.

“I used to be a department store detective,” she said. “In New York City. I got good at watching people, figuring out what they’d do before they did it. Traveling feels the same, except nobody’s stealing anything. Usually.”

He laughed, a low sound he hadn’t heard from himself in weeks. “You’d be surprised.”

She smiled, and there was something sharp and warm in it, like a blade wrapped in silk. “Maybe I wouldn’t.”

When she excused herself to rest before their arrival in Da Nang, he watched her walk away. The flutter in his chest was unexpected, light, and foolish. He was fifty-six. He’d spent his life in jungles and dark drops, in interrogation rooms and cold case files. He’d been a deputy sheriff, sergeant, lieutenant, captain, and assistant chief. He’d punched out men who deserved it and a few who didn’t. He knew the shape of danger, the weight of a .45, the silence after a parachute opened at midnight.

He did not know the shape of a future wife.

But standing at the rail, alone, the voice had come again. Not a memory. Not a wish. A voice, louder than the wind, telling him his future wife was on this ship.

He didn’t believe it. He believed in footprints, motives, and the truth buried under lies.

Yet the voice lodged in his chest, and he didn’t shake it.


The next morning, the ship docked in Da Nang under a humid, bleached sky. Michael stood at the rail with a coffee, watching passengers stream down the gangway. He scanned for her—the brunette hair, the confident stride—but she wasn’t among the crowd. Already ashore, he figured. Eager for her jingles.

He had a case in Bangkok. A missing heiress the local police had abandoned. He should have been in his cabin, packing, reviewing files. Instead, he bought a second coffee from a dock stall and stood watching the port come alive. Mopeds buzzed past, carrying crates of fish and stacks of fabric. A woman balanced a basket of mangoes on her head. The air smelled of diesel, salt, and frying garlic.

He told himself he was just enjoying the morning.

By three in the afternoon, he was in his rented room at a hotel near the port, going over his case files. He’d almost pushed Rita out of his mind when a knock came at his door. He opened it to find the ship’s purser, a pale man with a nervous twitch in his left eye.

“Mr. Stone? I apologize for disturbing you.”

Michael stepped aside, letting him in. “What’s wrong?”

“It’s Miss Cross. Rita Cross. She didn’t return to the ship last night, and she hasn’t checked in with her hotel. The local authorities say she’s an adult, she could have simply extended her stay, but her itinerary was very specific. She had a tour booked this morning. She didn’t show.”

“Where was she last seen?”

“Disembarking around nine last night. That’s the last confirmed sighting.”

“Any sign of struggle? Ransom demand? Anyone following her?”

The purser shook his head, his twitch worsening. “Nothing. It’s as if she vanished.”

Michael set down his file. The old machinery in his chest clicked into place—observation, pattern, angle. The familiar heat of a hunt stirred.

He thought of her handshake. The way she scanned a room. The way she’d laughed at his joke.

“I’ll take it,” he said.

The purser blinked. “You will?”

“Consider me hired. Now tell me everything you know about her itinerary, her friends on board, anyone who spoke to her.” Michael grabbed a notepad from his bag. “Start with the last person who saw her.”

The purser talked. Michael wrote. And beneath the professional calm, the old, familiar thrill rose in his chest—the one that had carried him through night jumps and dark alleys, through cases everyone else had given up on.

The hunt was on.

And for the first time in years, he wasn’t just hunting for justice.

He was hunting for her.

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