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Chapter 4

Cracks in the Facade

Harding begins to probe Mary's life, discovering inconsistencies in her 'ordinary' persona and hints of a hidden world she inhabited.

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Detective Harding found himself staring at Mary Miller’s bedroom wall, the pale blue paint mocking him with its overwhelming ordinariness. It was the color of a thousand other teenage girls’ rooms, a blank canvas for a life that, according to her parents, had been equally unremarkable. He’d interviewed them for hours, the Millers, a study in controlled panic. Mr. Miller, his jaw tight, his eyes darting around the room as if expecting Mary to materialize from behind the floral curtains. Ms. Miller, a delicate bird, fluttering nervously, her answers soft, evasive, tinged with a grief that felt both genuine and somehow performed.

“She was a good girl, Detective,” Ms. Miller had whispered, her voice raspy. “Studious. Kind. Never any trouble.”

Mr. Miller had echoed the sentiment, his voice a low rumble. “A bit quiet, perhaps. Kept to herself. But never any trouble.”

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