Chapter 3
A Grumpy Suspect
Following a hunch, the friends head to Mr. Grumbles' rival candy shop across town. His shop is known for being less cheerful. They wonder if the grumpy Mr. Grumbles might have taken the lollipop to win a competition. The clues, however, don't quite add up.
The afternoon sun, which had been so cheerful just moments before, seemed to dim a little as Leo, Mia, and Sam turned their backs on Mr. Fitzwilliam’s empty display stand. The silence in the shop, usually buzzing with the happy crackle of wrappers and the gentle clinking of jars, now felt heavy. Leo, ever the leader, puffed out his chest. “We can’t just stand here,” he declared, his voice a little too loud. “That lollipop was special. We have to find it.”
Mia, her brow furrowed in thought, nodded slowly. “But where do we start? We’ve looked everywhere in the shop.” She tapped a finger against her chin, her mind already whirring through possibilities. “What if… what if someone took it from the outside? Maybe they smashed a window?”
Sam, who had been idly kicking at a loose tile on the floor, suddenly perked up. “Or maybe,” he said, his eyes wide with excitement, “maybe it was… a candy thief!” He mimed snatching something large and round, his hands sweeping through the air.
Leo’s gaze, however, was fixed on the dusty floor near the counter. He’d noticed it earlier, a small, dark object peeking out from under a discarded napkin. He bent down and picked it up. It was a button, a plain black button, the kind you might find on a coat. “This wasn’t here before,” he said, turning it over in his fingers. “And look,” he pointed to the floorboards, “there are scuff marks here too, like something heavy was dragged.”
Mia peered at the button. “It’s a bit plain for Mr. Fitzwilliam, isn’t it? He always wears those colourful vests.”
“And the scuff marks…” Leo mused, his mind already racing ahead. “They’re not clean, like something was just dropped. They look… deliberate.”
Sam, meanwhile, had wandered over to the shop door, peering out at the street. “Hey, remember that Mr. Grumbles? The one with the sour-faced candy shop across town?”
Leo’s eyes lit up. Mr. Grumbles. The words conjured a mental image of a perpetually frowning man with a shop that always smelled faintly of burnt sugar and disappointment. Mr. Grumbles was Mr. Fitzwilliam’s main rival, always trying to outdo him with cheaper, less imaginative sweets. He’d even complained once that Mr. Fitzwilliam’s prize lollipop was “unfair competition.”
“Mr. Grumbles!” Leo exclaimed, the idea taking root. “He’s always been jealous of Mr. Fitzwilliam’s lollipop. Maybe he stole it!”
Mia looked less convinced. “But why would Mr. Grumbles leave a button? And those scuff marks… they don’t look like they came from someone trying to sneak a giant lollipop out discreetly.”
“Maybe he dropped it in a hurry!” Sam insisted, already bouncing on the balls of his feet. “Come on, let’s go ask him!”
And so, with a shared nod of determination, the trio set off. The journey to Mr. Grumbles’ shop was a familiar one, a route they usually took when they wanted something a little different from the usual sweets. But today, the familiar streets felt charged with a new sense of purpose. They walked with a detective’s stride, their eyes scanning every detail.
Mr. Grumbles' shop was everything they remembered, and perhaps a little more so today. The sign, a chipped and faded red, read "Grumbles' Gummy Goods." The windows were smudged, and the display inside was a chaotic jumble of grey and brown candies, devoid of any sparkle or joy. A faint, unpleasant aroma wafted out, a mix of something vaguely medicinal and overcooked.
Pushing open the door, which creaked in protest, they were met with an even gloomier atmosphere. The lights were dim, casting long shadows across the shelves. Mr. Grumbles himself was behind the counter, his face a mask of his usual scowl. He was meticulously arranging a pile of what looked like grey, unidentifiable blobs.
“Well, well,” he grumbled, his voice like stones rubbing together. “What brings the Fitzwilliam fan club to my humble establishment?” He didn’t even look up.
Leo stepped forward, trying to sound braver than he felt. “Mr. Grumbles, sir,” he began, “have you… have you seen Mr. Fitzwilliam’s giant lollipop?”
Mr. Grumbles finally looked up, his small, beady eyes narrowing. A flicker of something unreadable crossed his face – surprise? Amusement? It was hard to tell with that perpetually downturned mouth. “Fitzwilliam’s lollipop? Why would I have seen it?” he retorted, his tone dripping with skepticism. “Probably rolled away, that thing. Too big for him to handle.”
Mia, ever the detail-oriented one, noticed something. “Mr. Grumbles, do you always wear black coats?” she asked, her voice calm but direct.
Mr. Grumbles blinked. “What business is it of yours?”
“Because,” Leo jumped in, holding up the button, “we found this. And it looks like a button from a black coat.”
Mr. Grumbles’ scowl deepened. He glanced down at his own coat, which was indeed black. He brushed at it absentmindedly. “Lots of people wear black coats,” he said dismissively. “Don’t accuse me of anything, you little brats.”
Sam, meanwhile, had been looking around the shop with his usual boundless energy, his eyes darting everywhere. He pointed to a large, empty space behind the counter. “Hey, Mr. Grumbles, what was in that space?”
Mr. Grumbles’ eyes followed Sam’s finger. For a fleeting second, his scowl faltered, replaced by something that looked suspiciously like… regret? “That’s none of your concern,” he snapped, his voice harsher than before. He then turned back to his grey blobs, his shoulders hunched.
The children exchanged glances. The button, the scuff marks, the empty space… Mr. Grumbles was certainly acting suspicious. But something still felt off. The scuff marks they’d seen near Mr. Fitzwilliam’s counter had seemed… rougher. More like something had been bumped and scraped, not deliberately dragged. And Mr. Grumbles, despite his grumpiness, didn’t seem like the type to steal something so openly. He was competitive, yes, but he was also, in his own odd way, honest about his sour sweets.
“He’s not telling us the truth,” Leo whispered to Mia and Sam as they backed out of the shop, the door groaning shut behind them.
Mia nodded, her logical mind piecing together the puzzle. “If he had stolen it, he would have hidden it better. And the scuff marks… they didn’t match the ones we saw. They were too deep, too… clumsy.”
Sam, who had been so excited about confronting Mr. Grumbles, now looked a little deflated. “So it wasn’t him?” he asked, his voice tinged with disappointment. “But then who was it? And where did the lollipop go?”
They stood on the sidewalk, the grey facade of Grumbles’ Gummy Goods behind them, the bright sun now feeling like a mocking spotlight. The button felt heavy in Leo’s pocket. They had followed a promising lead, but it had led them to a dead end, or at least, a very grumpy, unhelpful one.
“We need to retrace our steps,” Mia said, her voice firm. “Back to Mr. Fitzwilliam’s. We need to look at those scuff marks again. And that button. Where else could it have come from?”
Leo agreed. The thought of the rival candy maker, so close and yet so wrong, was a strange one. It meant the mystery was still very much alive, and the giant lollipop was still out there, somewhere. He kicked a loose pebble, his mind already replaying the scene in Mr. Fitzwilliam’s shop. The scuff marks. They weren’t just scuff marks. They were… longer. And curved. Like something had been… pushed.
As they turned back towards Mr. Fitzwilliam’s, heading away from the sour smells of Grumbles’ Gummy Goods, Leo felt a flicker of an idea, a tiny spark of intuition. The scuff marks hadn’t looked like they came from inside the shop. They looked like they came from… outside. And if they came from outside, they wouldn’t lead to Mr. Grumbles’ shop across town. They would lead somewhere else entirely. Somewhere closer. Somewhere with… grass. And bushes. And perhaps, a very playful dog.