Chapter 8
The Detective's Doubt
Henry tries to revisit his parents' cold case with Detective Harding. Harding is dismissive, citing lack of evidence, but Henry notices a flicker of unease, suggesting the detective might be under pressure.
The precinct air hung thick and stale, a familiar scent of stale coffee and weary resignation that tightened Henry’s chest. He’d been here before, a lifetime ago, a boy adrift in a sea of official pronouncements and hollow condolences. Now, he was a man, armed with a brittle resolve and a gnawing hunger for answers that time had only sharpened. Detective Harding’s office was a cramped box, cluttered with overflowing file cabinets and a desk that bore the scars of countless investigations. Harding himself, a man whose face seemed etched with the very weariness of the precinct, sat behind it, his gaze as unyielding as the chipped ceramic mug in his hand.
“Mr. Vance,” Harding said, his voice a low rumble, devoid of any warmth. He didn’t offer a handshake, didn’t invite Henry to sit. The message was clear: this was not a social call.
“Detective,” Henry replied, his own voice steady, a careful construction built over years of suppressing the tremor that threatened to break through. He remained standing, a silent assertion of his presence, his purpose. “I’m here about my parents’ case. The murders of Eleanor and Arthur Vance.”
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