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The Serpent's Coil

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The Serpent's Coil

A retired and widowed special constable retires with his afghan wolf hound Voctor to a village near dart moor. There he gets involved in murders and disappearnces at first glance done by ghostly hands but on further investigation have a…

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Previously

…This was not the work of a mythical beast. The logic was too absent, the patterns too… deliberate. He watched the flames dance, the shadows in the room seeming to lengthen and twist, and knew, with a certainty that settled deep in his bones, that his retirement was not going to be as quiet as he’d hoped. The Serpent of Dartmoor might be a legend, but the darkness that stalked Oakhaven was very real, and it was human. He could feel it. And for the first time in months, Arthur Pendelton felt a purpose greater than simply remembering Eleanor. He felt the call of the constable, reawakened.

The morning broke grey and sullen, a fine mist drifting off the moor and curling in languid tendrils around the stone walls of The Rookery. Arthur Pendelton rose before the sun, the old habit never quite lost, and moved through the chilly hush of the cottage. Victor padded at his heels, claws tapping soft and steady on the flagstones, amber eyes alert. Outside, the world smelled of earth and peat, of distant sheep and the ghost of rain.

Arthur’s mind returned ceaselessly to the missing ewes and to Thomas Croft, vanished as soundlessly as a sigh. Had the villagers always looked at strangers with such suspicion, or was it the darkness gathering at their shoulders now? Oakhaven was a place of secrets and stone, and he felt its gaze upon him as much as any living soul’s.

He checked the lock on the gate and set out along the narrow lane towards the standing stones, Victor’s lead loose in his hand. The moor stretched away, a patchwork of frost-bleached grass and bracken, the tors hunched like old bones against the horizon. The mist thickened as they reached the northern field. The stones rose before him, hunched and silent, their surfaces slick with dew and lichen, ringed with old offerings: a scatter of coins, a smudged candle, a twist of sheep’s wool wound with red thread.

There was a disturbance beneath the stillness. Arthur crouched beside the fence, Victor nosing curiously at a ragged tuft of wool snagged on the lowest wire. No prints, no drag marks – nothing but a lingering sense of trespass. Victor whined again, his hackles bristling. Arthur straightened, scanning the perimeter. He caught sight of something out of place: a boot print, nearly erased by the damp, leading towards the thickest part of the heather. He knelt, measuring the stride, noting the tread – far too large for Croft’s slight frame, and recent.

The air sharpened as he stood, and he realized he was not alone. A figure moved between the stones, just beyond the reach of the mist, pausing with an animal’s tense wariness. The shape was indistinct – tall, broad-shouldered, the face lost in shadow beneath a flat cap. Victor stiffened, a low rumble vibrating in his chest. The man watched Arthur in silence.

Arthur felt the old instincts stir, the poised alertness before action. He called out, his voice measured with practiced authority. “Morning. Are you out for a walk, or have you business in these fields?”

The figure hesitated, one hand flexing at his side. For a moment, Arthur thought the man might bolt. Instead, he turned slowly, stepping back so that the mist half-swallowed him. “Don’t belong here,” the voice growled, rough and unfamiliar. “Best you mind your own, Pendelton.”

The name struck like a thrown stone. Arthur’s muscles tensed. Victor’s ears flattened, his body angled protectively. The man took another step, dissolving further into the fog, his outline smudging at the edges. The air between them bristled with threat and secrecy, the ancient stones holding their counsel.

Arthur weighed his next move, the path ahead fraught with uncertainty. The moor was awake now, its old stories whispering in the mist, and Arthur felt himself drawn inexorably forward, poised at the edge of something that would not be denied.

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