Rehea Barnes

Featured book

Party Girl

She was a high society party girl. She joined the navy after college graduation with two degrees did two years in Afghanistan. She joined the cia, traveled the world. Took down crooks in the party scene. When death in the family called her back into that world, she uncovered secrets about what she knows or so she thought she knows. Can she uncover the truth or half truth. - She joined the navy after college graduation did two years in Afghanistan. -> She joined the navy after college graduation and did two years in Afghanistan. (Added 'and' to connect two related clauses and create a proper compound sentence.) - She joined the cia, traveled the world. -> She joined the CIA and traveled the world. (Capitalized 'CIA' as it's an acronym, and replaced the comma with 'and' to properly connect the two actions.) - When death in the family called her back into that world, she uncovered secrets about what she knows or so she thought she knows. -> When a death in the family called her back into that world, she uncovered secrets about what she knew or so she thought she knew. (Added the article 'a' before 'death', and changed 'knows' to 'knew' twice for proper past tense consistency.) - Can she uncover the truth or half truth. -> Can she uncover the truth or half-truths? (Removed extra space, added hyphen to 'half-truths', made 'truths' plural for parallel structure, and added question mark since this is an interrogative sentence.)